Revision

      I chose to revise my Lord of The Flies paper, because I found it to be the most interesting writing subject we did this year. I chose to focus on transitions because they had the most negative effect on my essay originally. Working on transition helped me make a better case for my thesis. I also focused on the tense of my essay to make sure that it expressed my thesis the way I wanted it to sound. Originally I had told the story story in my essay, but did not have enough commentary. This detracted from my goal of explaining how work was a central theme of the book.

All Play and No Work
            In William Golding’s Lord of the Flies, a group of preteen boys trapped on an island are able to show how human nature works. Being left alone with no adult leader on the island, the boys start a war. Their desire to get away from work and have more fun is the main reason why they start a microcosm of the whole world’s war. In the heat of the moment, Jack and his new tribe kill Piggy and Simon during the war. The root of the issue on the island was that the boys did not want to work.
The boys do everything to avoid working. They will not help Ralph build the huts, and Ralph cries out saying that he needs them to help. Ralph says, “They keep running off. You remember the meeting? How everyone was going to work hard until the shelters were finished?” (50). This is the first sign in the book that shows the boys do not want to work, and just want to have fun while on the island. Despite having a meeting regarding helping build a shelter, the boys choose to hunt, and upon their return from hunting, they goof off rather than pitch in to help. In order for them to survive on this island, they would need to have shelter. However, Ralph and Simon were the only ones working to be sure that they would survive. This is the beginning of the tension between the hunting boys and the working boys that will eventually lead to war.
            Work involves doing what you need to do and not just what seems fun. This is demonstrated when Jack and his gang kill the pig. They portray complete savagery, as they chant with blood on their faces. The scene shows that the boys have tons of fun killing pigs, and while they are doing it they all sing a grotesque chant: “Kill the pig. Cut her throat. Spill her blood” (69). They would rather hunt and kill than do anything else, especially work. However, Jack forgets that it was his job to stay and guard the fire while the boys went on their hunt. Instead of staying near the fire, he chose to join the others in the quest to kill the pig. While Jack was away hunting, the fire diminished and a ship came by that could have seen the fire. They missed their opportunity to go home. This strengthens the tension between the two groups, the hunting and the working boys, because the hunting boys are putting all of their chances of being rescued at risk. Ralph gets filled with anger when Jack lets the fire go out, because it could have saved them, and this ignites the hatred between the two groups.
            Work often involves getting along with others. A good worker does not just abandon the group. As the tensions between the groups rise after they kill the pig, Jack decides to leave the group. He only wants to hunt, and he feels like the working groups should allow him to do so. However, when they don’t allow him to just hunt, he leaves them. Jack says to the group, “I’m going off by myself. He can catch his own pigs. Anyone who wants to hunt when I do can come too” (127). Jack says this because he doesn't want to listen to Ralph's orders anymore. Jack does not like taking orders about things that he does not want to do. He does not want to help Ralph; he only wants to hunt. Jack leaves and all the other boys leave with him except for SamnEric, Piggy, Simon, and Ralph.
            A responsible does not place the blame for his wrong action on other. The first time the two groups see each other after their split, Roger drops a huge boulder on Piggy, while he's holding the conch. This results in the death of Piggy. After his death, Jack is telling Ralph that none of this would have happened if Ralph would not have tried to make all the boys work, “See? See? Thats what you'll get! I meant that! There isn't a tribe for you anymore! The conch is gone” (181).  Piggy was holding the conch when the boulder crushed him, so the conch was destroyed with Piggy. Jack blames the murder of Piggy and destruction of the conch on Ralph and his want for everyone to work. Not only does this heighten the strain between the two groups, but the conch also represents peace and order on the island. When the conch explodes, it means that all peace and order on the island is gone. The island is now in complete anarchy. This is the turning point from government into anarchy. The boys’ refusal to work split the group up into two groups, which leads to anarchy and war.
            Responsibility can only put off for so long. After Jack decides to burn the forest to try and find Ralph, he sees a captain of a ship standing on their island. The reality of this situation finally hits Ralph:
            The tears began to flow and sobs shook him. He gave himself up to them now for the                      first time on the island; great, shuddering spasms of grief that seemed to wrench his                  whole body. His voice rose under the black smoke before the burning wreckage of the                    island; and infected by emotion, the other little boys began to shake and sob too. And in                  the middle of them, with filthy body, matted hair, and unwired nose, Ralph wept for the                 end of innocence, the darkness of man’s heart, and the fall through the air of the true wise             friend called Piggy (248).
This is the return to reality, as the boys realize that their actions were complete savagery, and end up feeling horrible for killing Piggy and Simon in the way they did. When Ralph sees the ship captain standing on the island, all of his emotions that had been built up on the island finally burst.
            The split between the two groups of boys leads to anarchy and war. The division among the groups reflect their newfound hate of each other. When Jack only wants to hunt, but Ralph needs them to work, tensions among the boys rise. The split between the boys leads them to being
vicious towards one another. Their unified government eventually turns into anarchy which leads to violence and war because of the division between Jack and Ralph. In the end, the want to get away from work almost leads the boys to destroying their chances of survival on the island.
Works Cited

Golding, William. Lord of the Flies. Penguin, 1954.

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